I have read your story. The plot line is very nice. I would just like you to give a suggestion. Seeing your writing, I think you can develop this plot into a better manner. How about a story in which Abhira, the latest track in which Vidya is asking Arman to take revenge for her humiliation and asks Arman to humiliate Abhira just the way she was humiliated. I am not a regular person who watches it on a regular basis, I have still watched parts and glimpses. So I would like you to write just a suggestion that perhaps you could develop a story in which Arman actually does something just for the sake of Vidya, he does something. By humiliating, I don't mean that he does something very drastic. But something that is equally insulting for her, something that will hurt her respect. So in that way, this will be like a final way in which Abhira will finally realize that perhaps Arman or all these problems, this is never going to get sorted. Where she actually tells him that how every single time he has hurt her. Because right now her character, it doesn't make sense. It's like she is not even firm on her own decision. First she wanted to fight for her brother's justice and now she is not even firm about it, running behind Vidya. It is almost as if both the characters are being shown as equally spineless. Both Arman and Abhira having no care about their own respect. This doesn't make sense. Perhaps you could develop this where all the instances where Arman has disrespected her. Because even silence in face of his family's words is like being a part of that insult as well. Like if he is not stopping his family from insulting Abhira, this means he is equally playing a part in it. Other than that, the stories that you have already written, they are amazing, brilliant. Your writing style is actually very nice. So if you do find time, please think about this and maybe you could write a story. I would love to read one.
