Rider2428

Short chapter up and I promise the next to be longer. But here is the basic rundown of what to expect with the new changes coming.
          	
          	1. More consistent character interaction
          	2. General grammar check  
          	3. Tweaks to the intro of the story 
          	
          	A appreciate you all sticking around and I hope to finish this story by the end of the year.

Rider2428

@Entrenchedmemes I may include more mentions of it but air warfare to me is overly technical. With the resources and basic understanding I have I prefer to write land warfare.
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Entrenchedmemes

@Rider2428 I would love to see some f 35s in action sometime in the future. Apex seems to be ok on the ground, but it was mentioned that they had poor air superiority in a previous chapter
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Alien_WolfDragon

Rider I have a question.

Rider2428

@Alien_WolfDragon no worries, my discord is rider2428 and I’m more active on there than here.
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Rider2428

Short chapter up and I promise the next to be longer. But here is the basic rundown of what to expect with the new changes coming.
          
          1. More consistent character interaction
          2. General grammar check  
          3. Tweaks to the intro of the story 
          
          A appreciate you all sticking around and I hope to finish this story by the end of the year.

Rider2428

@Entrenchedmemes I may include more mentions of it but air warfare to me is overly technical. With the resources and basic understanding I have I prefer to write land warfare.
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Entrenchedmemes

@Rider2428 I would love to see some f 35s in action sometime in the future. Apex seems to be ok on the ground, but it was mentioned that they had poor air superiority in a previous chapter
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Rider2428

A new chapter is coming before the end of the month, after that, I will start revisions to fix, correct, and adjust certain aspects I have issues with. Any feedback will be factored in as I write the story's last 5-8 chapters. Thank you for your continued support.

Wendingo646

Looking for Wendigos 
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Killerqueen181

Looking for Rick grimes to appear
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TheLambdaRebel107

Out of curiosity, is your story gonna have lemons in it? I'm askinh because haven't read the full thing yet.