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hello, yes I am some rando, but I previously read your 'The broken sans' and I want to say I loved it. I'm so sorry for the accident that happened, you didn't deserve that. Life can be so cruel sometimes. I hope your doing better and please take care, that story was a wonderful experience and again, I'm sorry, for everything that happened. I wish you the best and yea I'm a random person lol I'm jus like that I guess. Thank you and take care!

I spent so much time writing the general idea of each chapter... I LITERALLY HAVE OVER 3K WORDS WORTH OF GENERAL IDEAS AHHHHH
          That's more than a chapter. Well, I needed this, since I could now just write it, and not worry about needing to think of an idea & title & everything. I have it here ^, so it's good. I'll try making more chapter but I will be forced to take out some words. On average, it takes me about 3 hours of thinking, editing and fixing the cringe per 1 chapter for something that's barely 1.7k words. I'm not stupid. Not happening. I will cut down the words to about 1k per chapt, but I promise the quality will not go down. Well, I better go to sleep now, good night ^^

Arcs (20+):
          20-21 : Revival
          22-25 : William's Crush
          26-30 : Tangled Multiverse
          31-33 : I guess we're stuck here
          34-38 : Date and Boyfriend
          39-43 : Omniversal Scale War
          44-46 : Plot Armor
          47-50 : Times of Peace
          
          Chapter names/what to expect of them
          5 : The Kidnapping and The plan
          6 : Free
          7 : Who is he?
          8 : Attack on the EdenSphere
          9 : The true Power of the Conduits
          10 : War
          11 : Faker's Minions
          12 : Betrayal
          13 : Moth
          14 : Error's Training
          15 : Introduction
          16 : Triple Error Trio
          17 : Death
          18 : How dare you!?
          19 : Blind Rage
          20 : Solution
          21 : Resurrect
          22 : I think I like him!
          23 : What if he doesn't like me back?
          24 : Preparing to ask him out
          25 : I-I think I like you...
          26 : Where are we?
          27 : So many Errors!
          28 : Can I adopt them?
          29 : What do you mean we can't go back?!
          30 : Think of the positive side!
          31 : Acceptance
          32 : Bonding time
          33 : Going insane... 
          34 : Finally dating
          35 : Fancy Restaurant 
          36 : Cuddles & Kisses
          37 : I love you
          38 : I dont know how I managed to fall in love with you.. 
          39 : Why are there 2 Fakers? 
          40 : Attack them in their base! 
          41 : Help from the other 404 Versions of that Omniverse!
          42 : N!404 Joins the Fight
          43 : You genius! 
          44 : "I promise... I will win this war for us" 
          45 : William's True Full Power
          46 : The Showdown
          47 : Death of the Faker's
          48 : Peace treaty between the Omniverse
          49 : "Will you marry me?" 
          50 : Family
          
          

Got everything together. Still not going to edit the chapters, since I only have a bit of the idea. Anyways, here are the arcs until chapt 20 :
          1-3 : Healing what has been broken
          4-6 : The Kidnapping
          7 : Bill
          8-10 : All out war! Part 1
          11-13 : All out war! Part 2
          14-17 : Triple Error Devastating Trio
          18-20 : Perfect!Conduit!Rage 

Yeah... I'm not gonna publish chapt 5. I can't really think of anything that would make it worth reading, and me elaborating and putting a lot of effort to make it sound really nice just isn't a great idea. I would rather have something with plot rather than something that sounds really nice and well made but doesn't have any plot. Rather not make it. I'll still plan the next few chapters, only this time until chapter 20. Well, I guess I will be giving updates while making the v1. Cya. 

Uh... Don't expect the nezt chapter soon. I had finished editing it, but I ended up scrapping it completely. I was proofreading it once again, since I thoroughly search for errors, and I did not like how the plot went. I then went to my other pre-written chapters, and I found the same thing. Bad plot. Too many plot holes to fix. So I ended up scrapping 12 chapters. I'll take a break for a day after making chapt 5 to get my ideas in order and make respectable chapters, and I might as well improve it. I'll take my time to actually try making them good and worth reading. Idk why, but I feel like the first 2 chapters are below average, and the last 2 (3 & 4) are respectable, and worth reading. I definitely enjoyed writing chapter 4 the most, tho. I like gore n blood n killing tbh.
          
          
          
          
          Still on the topic of chapter plot, I won't completely scrap chapter 5, because I definitely liked the idea, just not how I made it be. 

Next chapter (chapt 5) is halfway done!
          
          
          
          
          
          Expect it soon. =) 

Chapter 4 is up now! I will be frecvently putting updates on how the story is coming, since I already have 12 more chapters made. The only problem, is that I need to get them edited (to have atleast average grammar and also not have plot holes like : Jacob was hit. He couldnt ve seen. He lost Javon. The end.). The thing I wrote in () is a representation of how the chapters look before editing. Barely any words, like only about 700 per chapt, they have trash SPEELING and they also have plot holes. If you see any plot hole or mistake in the story, write a comment on the part that had the mistake, and tell me what mistake I made. I'll try my best to correct it.
          
          
          
          
          Chapter 5 sneak peek :
          "Error! Where are you?" - William. 

Chapt 2 has now been remade, less cringe and less SPEELING mistakes. I had already checked chapter 3 for SPEELING mistakes, as said in one of earlier comments. 

Alright, Chapter 1 is not so cringe anymore, and I also fixed the SPEELING mistakes *lenny face*
          
          Time for chapt 2