@Minjroll777 I read it ,the plot is engaging, you write
in short phrases and don't dwell in description it almost reads like a poetry which is a strength in its own but u could at times dwell into being descriptive when it's needed
The chapters are short and we know the character as children and you make my heart ache the way u have written it i feel like adopting arien when she is looking in the sky asking her dad why he left her
in chapter 2 ig
It's lovely overall I would love to see Arien grow up and see what she does and I am really curious about Adam, his past where he comez from
