Rhaine Diel

@RileLan hey,  thanks for the really great suggestion!  I will have a look at it this weekend and rewrite it :) that does make way more sense :D thanks for the tips and I'm glad you are liking the story :)

@Heart_Strings24 Ohh, I love the plot of the story and all, but I'm kind of confused with the character and their past and how the story seems to move too fast, like how Nicole made Cole admit what he really thought of the main character ( Soorry, I forgot her name. I read like 10 books at a time so its really hard for me to remember most of their names and all ), and you should make Nicole wait a bit longer before spilling Cole's feeling and maybe let Cole sugar-coat it or something. Or you could make that part change and make the argue in a room where the main character walks in, then Nicole acts like she wasn't what they were talking about, and Cole acts dumb, which makes the main character a bit suspicious and curious?!

@XxNoizxX. nothing...

@-TetsuyaKuroko-  aww what happened?

@XxNoizxX. Ohh, Noiz! You wouldn't say that if you know what's behind those sweet words. :p But I'll let him go, once. And try to have fun, like you want since he's my bestfriend after all.

@-TetsuyaKuroko- I mean I tried to be a gangster sometimes, and also a brat.. X_X and my father kills me when I did

@-TetsuyaKuroko-  okay? it's that okay to you? pfffff I mean you're just too high when it comes to @XxFallingMexX messing with ya and you always taking it really REALLY seriously right? I mean don't be just too serious man, read it like it is really funny

@-TetsuyaKuroko-  and @XxFallingMexX just calm down ya two huuuuu-

@XxFallingMexX  Loved you? are you crazy!

@XxFallingMexX  MEDICINES? YOU, YOU , YOU ARE THE ONE WHO NEEDS TO TAKE MEDICINES, YOU FREAKING RETARD!!

@AnimeGeekster .  Well, that's good ! But the sad thing is, I didn't really said that you were " at loss for word".. Hehehe.. Hello there, too! :)

@-TetsuyaKuroko-  what the??

@XxNoizxX hahahaha