Bradycarter

Hey Riley hope you've been well just enjoying re reading your fanfic on cell block h and double checking in not dreaming. Have you changed the story slightly? It's still fantastic but seems different in near the end where Joan has been pulled out the rubble of the falling blackmoor dead and Lucy is watching. 
          
          Wasn't it marina who killed Joan and Lucy got blamed and it was her body that was pulled out of the prison?

RileyJones622

@Bradycarter Liam is my favourite character in Bad Boys. Nola was one of my favourites in Prisoner. I didn't think she was that bad really when you consider everything she did was for a reason. She killed Paddy to stay in a Melbourne prison to escape the death penalty. She beat people up after thay had attacked her first. She was fair to Faye as a partner and it was really the Freak pulling the strings in most of their schemes. Nola didn't exactly feel guilt after doing something bad but it never felt like she did it without a reason. Whereas characters like Lou and Marie Winter just seemed evil for fun.
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Bradycarter

And it fits with him being Nola if Nola hadn't had all that stuff with a former husband in sure she's be nicer you know
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Bradycarter

@Bradycarter I quite like Liam he's complex . He's a bastard but has moments of emotion. Regretting killing the cops, being nice to Karl etc :)
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Bradycarter

Hi Riley how old is Mandy slater meant to be in your cell block h fanfic? I originally thought she was Ari Nd late 30s to 40 but giving her sister Connie's age and the fact she's stated she's been incarcerated "months and months" which I thought she'd been in years. I'm guessing she's Only early 20s x?

RileyJones622

@Bradycarter Hi there. I pictured Mandy as quite young. Early or mid 20's. She and the Kelly Webster character i wrote in around the same time were both around the same age in my imagination.
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Survivor1010

Hey do you mind if I make a one shot book that takes place between the 2nd and 3rd book of your secret seven series

Survivor1010

@RileyJones622 cool, honestly didnt expect you to say yes
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RileyJones622

@Survivor1010  You can write it if you like
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sdanban

I've been up all ni8 reading Jake punishment I'm literally devastated.
          Assume I'm on my knees bowing my head like Jake and begging U to give Jake a happy ending plz plz plzzzzz.
          
          I'm really crying rn. I can't cope up wid daily work coz of ur injustice 4 Jake. #Justice4Jake

sdanban

Or plz give a alternate ending whichs fair for Jake he deserves hapiness...
            I'm goin crazy bout it can't stop crying
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Lanna1038

Bro I started and finished reading Jake's punishment yesterday it's great it gave me motivation no words can describe of how great it is I think I'll start reading it again probably these days. At first when I saw 56 chapters I was like "tf I probably won't finish this in ages" but here I am starting and ending the book same day. I feel so open minded. Plus I like how the story didn't have a happy ending I mean not every story has a happy ending right? Amazing just amazing.

RileyJones622

@Lanna1038 Thank you so much, i am really happy and glad that you enjoyed it and that you are even reading it again already. i thought a happy ending would be a bit cliche and predictable.    
            
            Alex is cool, all stories need a bad boy i think. They are always good fun and Danny became a goodie after starting as a baddie so Alex needed to stay bad as a good balance.
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Lanna1038

@Lanna1038 I forgot to say but honestly Alex was my favorite character in the story
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sqeaky19

Hey just finished reading Jake's punishment and I just wanted to say it was amazing... I was a bit sceptical at first but in the end I loved it...not everyone has a happy ending but that's ok, we just need to accept it and move on. Hate gets us nowhere and it might be cheesy or seem fake but this book gave me a new outlook on everything. ps: idk but if you ever need an editor, or some ideas on the expansion of a story...literally anything I'm here to help

sqeaky19

thx :)
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RileyJones622

@sqeaky19 Thank you very much i am glad you enjoyed it. I didn't want there to be a happy ending like the ones you always see in Disney or Hollywood movies because most of the time life doesn't work out happy like that. I liked the idea that Jake would still be punished and still face prison, but at the end he is now in a legal prison and he comes to terms with it and finds some peace with it. 
            
            Thanks for the offer, i haven't been writing for a while, i have a few ideas for stories but don't feel particularly motivated to write anything right now.
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joker771

Do you just update prisoner whenever or is it kind of a schedule you follow? Just wondering and I totally understand if it’s just whenever.

joker771

@RileyJones622 I guess I gave myself away oops...lol 
            
            I am a fan to see how things will go or end. Your plot line has a lot of ends and such things are always interesting in your book.
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RileyJones622

@joker771 Thank you very much, what a nice thing to say. I am guessing you must be a Prisoner fan too then?
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joker771

Yup, I like your style of writing and the emotions of characters coming to live. Just keep doing what your doing. I can’t force you to write but I hope you can get inspired or so to write soon or even a new book. I’m waiting to see how jakes life will turn out from his punishment
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