EiraLennox
Thanks for reading what are your thoughts now that you have caught up?
EiraLennox
@umbreonespeon Thanks for the feedback I will definitely look for that book. As for the tags thing I did have them and then when I checked today the tags and description were gone. So I redid both, and I plan on updating either tonight or tomorrow.
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RileyNicolai
I think it's a good story that has a lot of potential to become better. A good book that will help with writing is "Writing Mistakes You're Making" by Lithiaium. It really helped me, not just for stories, but my writing in general. Also, adding tags to your story will help drive readers to your book. Can't wait till your next update. :)
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