RileyNicolai

@X_Wolfness_X  ill read it when u post it 

EiraLennox

Thanks for reading what are your thoughts now that you have caught up?

EiraLennox

@umbreonespeon Thanks for the feedback I will definitely look for that book. As for the tags thing I did have them and then when I checked today the tags and description were gone. So I redid both, and I plan on updating either tonight or tomorrow. 
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RileyNicolai

I think it's a good story that has a lot of potential to become better. A good book that will help with writing is "Writing Mistakes You're Making" by Lithiaium. It really helped me, not just for stories, but my writing in general. Also, adding tags to your story will help drive readers to your book. Can't wait till your next update. :)
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EiraLennox

I have noticed that I often think faster than I can type and then autocorrect does some frustrating things. If you get to a certain point in my book you will notice I left an editing message about wattpad giving me trouble when I edit my book. so frustrating.

EiraLennox

Hey I came across your book and I guess you take book requests. I was wondering if you could read my book "Aurora Eyes". I am not looking for the votes necessarily, or a shout out, I just want some opinions. my readers don't comment. :/ But I understand I was once a silent reader as well.