My pen name is Rinna Carebim. I'm an animation fan, especially of original and uniquely designed cartoons like Steven Universe, Invader Zim, and The Powerpuff Girls. I've also picked up a writing hobby, meaning I spend a lot of money on sketchbooks, notebooks, pencils, and the works. I find this website my great escape into posting my works for critique. I do appreciate it, as criticism is what makes the good become the great. I might do requests, but they are limited. Rules are as follows:
1. I am not catering to perverts or fetishes, there is plenty of porn out there, but none of it is coming from me.
2. I am not a romantic mushy-gushy kisses and hugs writer, go read a Nicholas Sparks book.
3. I am not a miracle worker. I have things to do, so don't say, "Write me a 30-chapter tale about a man's adventures in parenthood when he discovers he is the father of three kids from different mothers. Oh, but I need it by next week so I can read it on the bus to college, thanks!"
4. Please don't rant about someone else's comment. If you are offended, be the bigger person and understand that different people do different things.
5. I may get dark. Anything too dark for younger audiences will be rated as such.
6. Critique is welcome. If you think it's utter garbage, then that's your opinion and I appreciate the criticism you provide in the comments box. Please refrain from swearing, however. You can say, "This is bad, go cry about it." Please don't say, "This is [bleep]ing [bleep] straight out of a [bleep]. Go [bleep] yourself." Have manners.
Favorites and Follows are always welcome, thank you!
- JoinedAugust 30, 2015
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Stories by Rinna Carebim
- 3 Published Stories
Christmas Alone
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The daughter of a young man's neighbor has fallen deeply in love with him, much to his dismay.
Say My Name
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I wrote this while I was feeling down. I was surprised to learn something about myself while reading it.