Rina chan

if anyone is wondering why my story isn't available,I am rewriting some parts in it and also working on another one(as a better start to the series)

احس لازم اغير بداية القصة،
          عشان ابي اخلي فيها تفاصيل اكثير،ايش رايكم؟ 
          
          
          I think that I should change the intro of the series, because I want to make it more detailed, what do you guys think?