Rinitoshi101010

Hello how you are guys? The story which i was writing is in ending phase from my side. I am writing on my own..but is my writing style good or should I change? cuz while re reading..i find there were too many repeated words perhaps. If it is ok, then tell me please. 
          	
          	And next chapter on 30 may. !!

Rinitoshi101010

Hello how you are guys? The story which i was writing is in ending phase from my side. I am writing on my own..but is my writing style good or should I change? cuz while re reading..i find there were too many repeated words perhaps. If it is ok, then tell me please. 
          
          And next chapter on 30 may. !!

Rinitoshi101010

Hello.... I am actually a reader. And lear writing after reading those stories. 
          One of the story suggestion was'if scups goes in another world/or in past and try to collect his member' . I really liked it So yeah i try ot make it by myself. 
          
          ITs my 1st time , there is gonna be helll mistakes so bare with it. Thank you
          
          My reader account- SS_reader  (if you read good big stories, you can see my comments there. )
          
          Thats all ig? I actually never use this..hehe 
          And if you guys like story..comment please, even 1 word is enough ig.

Rinitoshi101010

@188920hitler194530  yeah sure no prob.  send me the link if you make edit fro it. . and i don't understand what you mean by cover actually .
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188920hitler194530

@Rinitoshi101010 do u mind if I make a edit related to this story or a cover for u I love the cover u hv but I think it could absolutely do with something more intimidating .
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