I’d hate to bother you, but one of my good friends told me that she really wants some honest feedback on her work. It is called “Seth the Killer”, an original story with a semi-mature theme. It’s not about sex or anything, but it includes topics like murder, drug and alcohol use, and other things. I think her plot is pretty good...
Anyway, she is planning on rewriting it so that she can improve her writing skills a bit more. She just needs some honest criticism on it first. You don’t have to, but I was wondering if you wouldn’t mind looking through it. You don’t have to read the whole thing if you don’t want to, but she really wishes for some input.
I hope I wasn’t a bother. Thank you anyway for your time. :)
https://my.w.tt/RbCSH38utZ
