Risetta

Little tips:
          
          You hav a great imagination. I like it. But try to write more. For example chapter 1 u should write 3000k words or more. But it will take u 2 or 3 days. But don't panic for the next chapter. U should rest when your done. (So i hope the chapter 3 will be long enough to read)
          
          And don't just type.. -something like this 4 example:
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          Like that- if ya want do things like tht. try something different but not like that.
          
          Don't forget 2 use " & " when they talk.
          
          Your a great writer i hope u won't lose hope. And wish u complete your Stories in the future. I'll be just reading it.. if i saw one. Like your first story. But don't do something you won't finish (regret) as a writer.
           
          Hope u take this advice seriously.. because for ya number 1 support (I claim that one lol ☺) i will be advising more 
          
          Thank 4 reading ♡