@Tinaabling03 I don't criticize harshly and mostly I don't even criticize. Often, I ignore those negative sides, because no one is perfect, especially in the world of literature there's nothing called perfection❤️ Perfection is an illusion, given to us so that we can keep trying for better.
I mostly focus on highlighting the best aspect of someone's writing, my thoughts, what I felt and what's the takeaway. It's how I perceived your story. At the end, what does your story wanted to convey and how successful you were in that theme, matters the most.
My only problem is that I can't write concisely, they are mostly elaborate