
Hillstils
Your "Danmachi: Legacy" fanfic started off well, but you missed some points too much and gave Bell a huge power at the very beginning, it ruined the story…

Ritsuka_Fujimaru
@Histis5 I would like, and aspire, to be a good writer, so getting angry at criticism would be a huge mistake! So I really appreciate your opinion on the subject and I assure you that I will try to do better!
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Hillstils
@Ritsuka_Fujimaru :0 I'm surprised, I thought there would be aggression, the fact that you accept criticism already says a lot)
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Ritsuka_Fujimaru
@Histis5 I appreciate you reading the story and I'm very sorry that happened. I will try to improve.
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