RivalsEveningKiss

Does anyone have any tips on how to extend chapters more like make em appear longer or something 
          	
          	
          	
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RivalsEveningKiss

@Eatsshitonthedaily thank you  this is wonderful advice, I'm glad to finally have some feedback lol
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Eatsshitonthedaily

@RivalsEveningKiss I take little things like picking something up and make it dramatic, like "she smiled", i turn it into "she smiled warmly like a summer's wind" get it?
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RivalsEveningKiss

Does anyone have any tips on how to extend chapters more like make em appear longer or something 
          
          
          
          (I'm gonna cry ☠️☠️ longer auto corrected too "labor")

RivalsEveningKiss

@Eatsshitonthedaily thank you  this is wonderful advice, I'm glad to finally have some feedback lol
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Eatsshitonthedaily

@RivalsEveningKiss I take little things like picking something up and make it dramatic, like "she smiled", i turn it into "she smiled warmly like a summer's wind" get it?
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