RivalsEveningKiss
Does anyone have any tips on how to extend chapters more like make em appear longer or something
(I'm gonna cry ☠️☠️ longer auto corrected too "labor")
RivalsEveningKiss
@Eatsshitonthedaily thank you this is wonderful advice, I'm glad to finally have some feedback lol
Eatsshitonthedaily
@RivalsEveningKiss I take little things like picking something up and make it dramatic, like "she smiled", i turn it into "she smiled warmly like a summer's wind" get it?
