I am working on two chapters that are practically done on Thief now. But I realized something: In my haste to get the previous chapters out and into the world, I forgot to flavor them like I did the earlier ones! I had to criticize myself as I looked through and saw what I missed out on adding or what I should remove. I am just pretentious enough to nitpick at my chapters like theyre some kind of fancy museum art, and I want to improve them before I publish my next few chapters.
Also, to those who have beared with me all the way to my most recent chapter, thank you so much! My story is a mess right now, but as I fix it and add to it (and destroy it and rebuild it). I want to do what I can to make it something you all will want to read and something I can be proud of writing!