River_of_Echoes_

I am having issues with The Victor Sisters. Anyone want to volunteer to read the first 2 chapters and tell me if I should do a complete re-write? Ugh, help me please!

Little_Skies

@River_of_Echoes_ In reply to your forum comment, I agree. To give a bit of background story, said character has had a difficult life, and she just wants someone to take care of her for once instead of having to do everything herself. If you want to know more, it's in my work 'A Song of Shadows' :) I might take a look at some of your stuff: just looked at some of the descriptions and I'm intrigued...

River_of_Echoes_

A Song of Shadows sounds amazing, so I'm adding it to my reading list (I really need to start getting through that thing). And I'm glad you're intrigued by my stuff! But, most of it was written a while ago, and my writing has changed (and improved) quite drastically since; so the majority of stories are overwritten and need tending to. The only thing I'm happy with is 'The Victor Sisters'; which is my WIP. That's the only thing I'd recommend you read, to be honest. But thank you for this, it made me smile :)
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River_of_Echoes_

I usually hate doing this, mostly because I can never be bothered, but right now I'm bored, so... The Victor Sisters has been updated! Chapter 2 is up! Reads and comments are better than chocolate. Have I ever told you how pretty you guys are? *flirts shamelessly*