RoadSmut

Hoping to get the chapter out today. We'll see what happens...

RoadSmut

Sigh, went 36 hours without sleep to try to finish a work project. Never again.  I would love some feedback. In the next chapter, what are some things BF s you hope to see?

Readingtoo

@RoadSmut sorry- that was speak to text. It should say “abusive ex” not “abuse of x” lol
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Readingtoo

@RoadSmut for me, it depends on how long you’re planning on the book to be. I’m wondering if the abuse of X had something to do with the attack. Or if you’re saving him to be a separate source of trouble later on.i would love to see Rose make a healthy choice and come clean to … literally anyone about what she went through. And it would be awesome at some point for someone to help Jace get some peace. 
            My dream ending would be Jace getting the ex into a situation where he can be killed, and then letting Rose take the killshot. But that’s just me.
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lconedy

Author,
          This is one of the best “unfinished yet” stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading on this platform! I absolutely love your writing, and I am reading the chapters again, as a bit of a treat for myself! If you have any chapters already completed, please post more! Thank you!!!

lconedy

No worries or pressure from me! I just wanted you to know that your story and your words definitely resonate with readers. You are a gifted storyteller and it shows in your work! Thank you for allowing us to access and read this story. Much appreciated!
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RoadSmut

@lconedy thank you :). I’ve been working 12-14 hour days at work, so it’s cut into my writing time.
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