hi roarka. im a very beginner writer, would you mind checking out my story and telling me tips to improve?
I found out about you from flyingtothehorizon's story the roaring adventures of Pumpkin the lion and I am flyingtothehorizons brother.
I hope you willl check my story out!
Many thanks for your support, @Roarka. I hope you enjoy my work and please check the writers in my flock that are striving to improve themselves.
Here's a list of writing tips and topics (click link & scroll down to comment 67 & 68): http://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/comment/16772333/ should you need help with improving your writing skills.
If you only want to read, don't be afraid to comment or ask questions about the work.
All the best
FP