RobotLuigi

I made an updated character descriptions book, this one is far more organized and detailed.

RobotLuigi

Basically in the original Elite, I skipped lots of things that happened to try and make the story flow better. I might add more of the stuff that I didn't include in this new Elite. For example, there was a "superstorm" which I fully glossed over. I might add stuff like that into it, so if you want more backstory for characters, specifically Jack and Red, I can include those plots. I didn't include them for the main reason that they contribute nothing to the main story, but they lasted for several months. If you think I should add the less important stuff, tell me. If you think I should cut to the chase, and only highlight the important stuff, tell me.

RobotLuigi

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Hi it's me, the fucking dumbass. So I deleted Elite by mistake. I meant to delete something else, but it's 2 AM and I am not focused so I deleted the wrong stuff YAY! *exhale* I'll start re writing the story, but it will probably be a bit different from what I had before. SINCE it's gonna be different, i may as well ask some questions about how it will change, so that'll come up in another message thingy

Messicea

AHAHA! WELCOME TO THE CULT! : D
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