@Tima_Almedni Hello Tima! It's a pleasure to meet you. Thank you very much for your generous offer, but I'm afraid I might have to decline it Due to strict education and stressful environment from my hometown, I'm not sure I have the time and energy to help you write stories. I really wouldn't want to trouble or annoy you. Although, I'd be grateful to hear you out! I'm sure your creative ideas and plots are just as amazing and interesting as any authors out there!
Also, I'm not sure if you'd like my advice on how to write fruitfully/writing advice or not. So if you don't want my advice, you can just skip this part of the message and continue your merry day:
1. You can write things not so dull by not adding too much information or details in one place.
2. Write your plot with the 5Ws and 1H. Listing them usually helps me a lot. It just marks my progress.
3. Add adjectives and so-called fancy words, and don't repeat the same word or phrase too many times.
4. When writing your first draft, it's usually just as bad as you think. So don't correct anything when you write the first draft, ammend it after.
Yeah, so far, that's all I've got. I'd be willing to help you out or give you advice anytime you want. Good luck with your writing and have a great day!