amarante7342

Soooo I have a request  I'm always trying to make my book ((Escape)) better. But I don't really let anyone peer review it cause ya know nerdy anime oc stuff. Soooooooo I was wondering, if you were interested in heckling out my book anyway, if you could let me know what you think?? Like if a part is funny or sad or if the feeling is sent across okay??? 
          
          I know it's a weird request and you totally don't have to do it!!! 

amarante7342

Yeah! That works ☺️ or like if a certain line hits you or what not! If it's not a bother that is. 
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RockTrash

Hey!So Like I would comment the feeling the chapter would give me and see if thats the feeling you were trying to send to your readers?
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animexnarutoxanime

lol I'm 10 years old too!!! I'm more mature tho physically and mentally

RockTrash

Also, I reccomend checking your Bio's spelling and telling people to follow you is stupid. But that's my opinoin. I can't spell either.
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RockTrash

Mentally?Im so smart i have the mental capacity of a two year old.
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RockTrash

Phyically?  Im 5'5 and a C-cup somehow.
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