83Vuser
how are you doing?
I invite you to read my book
The first chapter is now available
https://www.wattpad.com/story/376744665-the-sadness-before-dawn
rainxclouds0312
heyy!!...can you review my story and give feedback on how's it and where should I improve? :))
Novastrider
@rainxclouds0312 so here's my first bit of feedback, for the sentence ", The walls were adorned with decorations giving the area (a distinctly royal vibe)" either remove the brackets, or instead, you can put "(giving the area a distinctly royal vibe") although in my opinions, just removing the brackets is best. Then, between "Decorations" and "giving", put a comma there.
Novastrider
hay
Rockystar01
@Novastrider you can share me your instagram account name so we can proceed and discuss better?