RomanticLover100

@seema_ahmad Hello, no problem! I appreciate the complement on my novel. The characters speak in such formality because they are in the 20th century, and they were brought up in a very Christian family and so they must speak in formality for respect. But sooner you will understand the further conflicts and actions that bring them back to the formality of that family. Please be patient. 
          	I'm glad you love Montreal! It's a very lively city and the bakery sell my favourite sweets. I'm extremely delighted to know you love my home town. What is your may I ask?

seema_ahmad

@RomanticLover100  Thx for enlightening me about your novel :-). Mine doesn't have nearly as much character as urs does: Toronto ;-)!
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RomanticLover100

@seema_ahmad Hello, no problem! I appreciate the complement on my novel. The characters speak in such formality because they are in the 20th century, and they were brought up in a very Christian family and so they must speak in formality for respect. But sooner you will understand the further conflicts and actions that bring them back to the formality of that family. Please be patient. 
          I'm glad you love Montreal! It's a very lively city and the bakery sell my favourite sweets. I'm extremely delighted to know you love my home town. What is your may I ask?

seema_ahmad

@RomanticLover100  Thx for enlightening me about your novel :-). Mine doesn't have nearly as much character as urs does: Toronto ;-)!
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seema_ahmad

HI Oceane:
          Thx for following me ! I really appreciate it :-)! I read the 1st chapter of ur novel, THE ANGEL'S SIGHT, and I think it's a great start! My only suggestion would be to make the language in the dialogue a little less formal?
          I welcome comments, particularly suggestions for improvement, for my novel as well. Hope to hear from u ;-)! BTW, I spent many summers in Montreal while growing up. Loved the city, particularly loved the Belgian Bakery ;-)!