@GoodRy2 Hello. Good day! I really appreciate that you reach out to let me know about your request. I am glad to read your story and provide insights, however, due to my current work schedule and commitments, I'm afraid that I may not be able to read your story atm. (Currently, I am one of the judges of an ongoing writing contest here in WP.)
Though, if given that I have time to spare, I'll give your story a go. Still, have a blessed holiday! *heart emoticon*