readerofwhatpadd
Hey author.
I just finished your masterpiece, Aazadi. I don't even know how to express the experience in words! The characters you have written—especially the female lead—are so strong, smart, and clever. I was getting so bored of the same old stories featuring a helpless girl with crushed ambitions in an abusive relationship, where there are only two options: either someone comes to rescue her, or she undergoes sudden character development.
But in this story, yes, a man comes along, but just as a supporter—not as a main hero who does everything on his own. The way the female character lived in that abusive household and never bowed down just truly touched my heart. While the story could have had a bit more suspense and maturity, it was still an overall excellent experience. Thank you for this masterpiece!
And I have one more request: could you please write a bonus scene featuring the pregnancy, delivery, and post-delivery moments with the sibling, Aradhya, and the baby? Please, just this one request.
Rooh_wrts
@readerofwhatpadd Hey, I’m honestly overwhelmed reading this. Thank you so much for taking the time to share your experience with Aazadi. I really appreciate you pointing out what worked and what could be better for next time. As this is my first ever story, I’ll try to improve in the future. Feedback like yours really helps me become a better writer. And about your request I can’t promise but I’ll try my best to write a bonus chapter for you and everyone who asked for it. Sending you lots of gratitude for being part of the Aazadi journey. Readers like you make all the writing worth it.
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