Roraprinz

Hello loves! I uploaded another chapter of He came back for me.  Figured I’d leave you on a good chapter. The rest of the book is on inkett if you want to finish it.  Enjoy!

KirkVoclain

Hi there, and THANK YOU for following me! I made sure to follow you back—you’re awesome for being here!
          
          So, I have a question… Have you been reading my novel, Double Exposure? If you have, I would LOVE to hear what you’re thinking! Seriously, I’m looking for honest feedback—the good, the bad, the “Hey, Kirk, maybe rewrite that part.”
          
          Here’s the deal: I’m a photographer, not an author. This is my first attempt at writing a novel, and I know there’s always room to grow. That’s where YOU come in. Your thoughts, opinions, and insights mean the world to me. They’re what will help me become better and turn Double Exposure into something truly special.
          
          So don’t hold back—let me know what you think! And again, thank you for your support. It means everything.
          
          Kirk

Roraprinz

So , "I've always been there" was removed for the second time.  I apologize to anyone hadn't finished it.  Who ever it was that reported me, I hope you get explosive diarrhea while stuck in traffic you troll!    If anyone wants to finish reading it head over to Inkett.  It's still there in its entirety.  That is all.

Roraprinz

BIG ANNOUNCEMENT!!  for anyone reading He came back for me, I am going to be unpublishing all of the chapters.  Over the weekend I was copying it to another site that I publish on and I started to edit it and realized the story is garbage the way it is right now.  I changed most of the story line as I was copying and pasting.  The mistakes in grammar, and typos due to writing on my phone at times was ridiculous! I apologize for anyone who has gotten to the last chapters.  the ending will remain the same, its just the journey that will be changing, and the time lines bothered me as well.  I rushed too many of the scenes, and even the mature scenes didn't even turn me on as I reread them.  You all deserve a lot better than the crap I wrote in that book.  I can honestly say that I'm ashamed to even have it on my profile as it is right now. I hope who ever has read along will check out the new version once its up, and those who started to read it and stopped because it was horrible will give it a second try.

Roraprinz

I cant answer that one way or the other cause then I'll ruin it for others just starting the story.  But I would def go back and re-read at least some of each new chapter I republish.  I've gone into more of Bianca's back stories with each love interest.   so she could end up with either one of them, or decide she doesn't want either one of them and their shenanigan's in the end.   She is an independent woman after all lol
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dreammcatcher99

@Roraprinz Steven and Bianca are endgame right? better be
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Roraprinz

He came back for me has two new chapters published. Please forgive any typos as I haven’t edited them yet. But nearing the end of the book has me itching to finish it. I’ll go back once it’s completed and polish up the whole book. 

Roraprinz

To anyone reading he came back for me, I've gone back into some of the chapters and made a few little changes.  Nothing major, just some point of view changes to make Garret/Nino seem more genuine and less creepy stalker.  I'm thinking about removing a lot of the mature scenes with Steven as well.  Part of me what to make Bianca wait until she's with Garret to loose her V card.  let me know your thoughts.

Roraprinz

New chapter is up for He came back for me. Hope you enjoy it! Don’t forget to hit the star at the end of the chapter or comment to let me know if you loved or hated it. I appreciate feedback back if I can improve something (besides typos).  Sometimes I get lost and over think or over describe a scene. When I edit I take a lot out but I’m sure there’s more I can take out or write in a different way. Let me know.  Happy reading!

Roraprinz

The newest chapter of He came back for me is up!  I apologize for any mistakes in advanced.  I read over it a few times, but started going cross eyed after a while.  I hope you enjoy and don't for get to comment and vote!