oceanedges
Pls update his to keep
ButterSc0tch02
Hey! I read your another book eyes down heart up it was awesome too I just feel that if you could add some more feelings/thoughts of elara of how she felt in some of the scene like when Caleb grabbed her or when she caught him looking at her while she was also noticing him, then it would be amazing but nonetheless it's still awesome! Girlllll you're an amazing writer!! ✨✨
ButterSc0tch02
@ButterSc0tch02 but you're characters are minors so I'm not sure whether spicing up too much would be a great idea.
ButterSc0tch02
@ButterSc0tch02 yeah definitely you should spice it up !! Moreover Wattpad has huge number of teen girls audience and they love spiced up romance!
Rosalinda2589
@ButterSc0tch02 Thanks a lot for the compliment. I'll try to improve. Though I'm wondering if it's spice I should add
ButterSc0tch02
Hey! do you've any schedule of uploading your novel *his to keep*?
ButterSc0tch02
@Rosalinda2589 okay sure! I just liked your concept and storyline of his to keep!! Don't worry I'll definitely try out your other books once I get free time!
Mellow1229
I love the way you write
Ben_Benita
That's a very nice story. I can't wait for chapter four