RoseWallinbee

Im back and everyone check out my supernatural  fanfic

33nust

For the book starlight on you.  not many people are leaving comments and voting because you need to make the chapters longer and give more detail about the story to make people more interested and to keep them hooked on the story. Also try to put in the story how the casts of narnia and hogwarts met and how hermione and edmund fell in love. i really hope i didnt upset u or anything because your story is really good and has a very interesting plot line it just needs a little more detail.