Rose_Riverwood

Heyyyyy! So I was wondering if anyone wanted to co-write with me? I think it would be a fun thing to do! So any takers?

PetterOdden16

Heyoo-ah Rosella, I hope you are well, if not I wish you all the best.
          You have just received an invitation to read a short story. Imagine a little visceral adventure about a friendship that you can only feel on a more hidden level, where everything can come crashing down just for a wish. Sounds like a bluff, right? I didn't believe it at first either. We have something to hide, sometimes we feel fear of loneliness tearing our skin. But enough talk, I hope you can enjoy the story and that the experience can be immersive for you. Thank you for your attention, now I will return to my tea.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/305718689

Rose_Riverwood

Hi! Rosella here, I just finished skimming your book, and I have a few notes. And I mean no offense when I say them, I know how hard it is to write and I hope you don’t stop. I think you lack a lot of emotions in your work and you lack a lot of relatable words and moments. You don’t have enough in it to keep a reader’s attention, if I’m being honest, if I hadn’t been directly asked to read it, I would have logged out and found something different. Again I am not trying to sound rude or mean, and I really would love to help you more, if your willing, but I think the topic could definitely be a perfect idea for a short story, and I really would like to know what you do with it. Thank you for asking me to read it! And I hope you find a good love for your next one!!
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