@iam_lotussdaisyy hey there :} I took a look at your book and read the prologue [that's the correct spelling btw] and it's nice, I'm getting the Indian vibe which is awesome but yep, as you said you do need to improve in your English. I understand it's your second language but every day you can try to make it better. And also, in your blurb, I think it would be better if you didn't put the first para in caps, and maybe even the last para convo doesn't need caps. Here's the thing: it would be better if you reduced the use of caps so it doesn't look overly dramatic and frankly a bit cringe. Sorry if I offended you, but it's my honest opinion. You can use it, but not too much. And I'm not sure if I'll read the entire book, but I'll try reading a few chapters. Other than that, you can try adding a few nice descriptions here and there, if you increase your vocabulary you can do it better and you just need to improve your grammar. That's all :}