To tell you the truth, I was waiting for someone to notice. My original scene was terrible, and then I just thought I'd do this (still trying to keep it slightly different) to fill it in, and then go back when I've finished writing my first draft. Tolkien, Disney and Avatar are inspirations, and if I can't think straight of how I actually want it to end up, I decide to do something like this and make a note in my journal to fix it later.
It's embarrassing, really, doing it this way, but in the end, it does help, cause remember, this is my first of like four drafts, so...haha
