RoxanaXO
@N_D_Iverson no problem I really like your story so far but as much as I hate to say this I think your story needs more deaths of characters that we love and what not because it will really help in my opinion develop the main characters personality and I would love to see a chapter of some anonymous character that could later make some type of apperance idk but please don't take any of what I said the wrong way I love your story this is just something I thought could be interesting in case you get writers block anyway thanks for reading this if you ever do it would be great wow I should probably stop writing anyways(again) love the story can't wait to read the update:) -XO
N_D_Iverson
@RoxanaXO haha of course I won't take offense. A good writer knows when to accept critisim. As for the lack of deaths, there is a reason for that. I wanted to use this book to make people attached to the characters and then calously rip them away from them in the sequel :P So there will more main character deaths, just not in this book. Thanks for reading!
