Heyyy!!
I hope you are doing good. I just wanted to say that your book seem like they have the potential. Ahaha, I was jusy checking my book and I saw yours so I thought I should check it out.
I may not be a very great writer but I'd love for your book to gain popularity!!
Well, the first thing that attracts readers is a beautiful cover. If you want, I'd love to make a cover for you!
Secondly, I would suggest deleting the kart where it says please read, it would just take the fun in the story out.
I'd also suggest on editing your descriptions for your book and maybe your bio as well since it may seem hard to read.
Ahaha, I am not sure if you would read this but I hope you do because I'd really love to help!!! ❤️❤️❤️