Hey there
My guide was written to help people learn how to get reads, votes, and feedback using the appropriate methods. It wasn't written and posted for people to advertise their need for services from the others reading it.
If you're needing feedback, I suggest you read it to get the information I've provided for the best ways to get it. You may also seek help in the Find a Critic thread in the Improve Your Writing club's Writer's Took Kit pinned thread.
I'm afraid I'm going to have to remove your comment.
Thanks
Katherine