Comfortshipper

Tanvi- i mean mai isse nhi chodhna chahti 
          
          Neil (cold tone)- bas mai jo bhi kuch kr rha hoon vo sirf isliye kr rha hoon kyuki tum iski maa…isse jyada mujhse kuch umeed bhi mat rkhna…yeh mat sochna ki mai tumse abhi baat kr rha hoon toh mai sab kuch bhul gya hoon…nhi aisa kbhi nhi hoga 
          
          Tanvi's smile disappeared right away nd she felt sad from Neil's harsh words….She looked down, her fingers holding the baby's tiny hands a little tighter…For a moment, it felt like the warmth had been taken away leaving her with a deep feeling of emptiness…
          
          Tanvi (cold tone)- ap ek hi baar ko kitni baar khenge neil?…mujhe ek baar mai samjh aata hai or mai yeh bhi janti hoon a ab hamare beech jo tha vo tha ab vaisa kuch nhi hai or shyd kbhi hoga bhi nhi apki taraf se toh bilkul bhi nhi…or agar hum saath hai toh vo sirf Mini Neil krke hai as her parents…nothing else…kyu mai sahi keh rhi hoon na neil?
          
          Neil- (no response)
          
          Tanvi- ab kyu chup hai ap?…p phele toh kitna bol rhe the sorry sorry phele se nhi pichle 5 dino se…ab kya hua apko bolti band ho gyi?
          

RsinghNawad

@Comfortshipper neil ka shyd dimag kharab ho gya ek hi pal mein badlta rehta hai( •̀_•́ )
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Neil- haa sab khenge ki yeh choti si pari kiski hai?…aur fir mai proudly khunga ki yeh meri beti hai
          
          Tanvi- meri bhi
          
          Tanvi nd Neil starts tickling her nd baby starts smiling nd they both watched their baby giggle, her tiny hands waving in the air as if she understood every word they said…
          
          Neil- pta hai jab pehli baar isse apni godh mai uthaya tha na…toh mujhe laga tha ki mai iss duniya ka sabse strong insan hoon…par ab jab isse dekhta hoon toh lgta hai ki yeh meri sabse badi kamzori bhi hai
          
          Tanvi- bas yeh nanhi si jaan hamari duniya hai
          
          Neil- Mini Neil apne hamari life mai aake hamari choti si duniya puri krdi 
          
          Tanvi- ap jo mil gye ho toh ab mumma ko kuch nhi chaiye…apko pta hai jab ap mumma ki tummy mai the toh mumma apse aise baatein krti thi or ab toh ap mumma ke pass ho mumma ke samne toh mumma ab apse bhut saari baatein krne vali hai
          
          Neil- or papa bhi
          
          Neil nodded nd leaned down to place a soft kiss on their baby's tiny fingers as she held onto his thumb tightly….
          
          Neil- Itni choti si hai par pakad dekho…jaise papa ko kabhi chodhna hi nahi chahti ho
          
          Tanvi- Chodhna toh mai bhi nahi chahti…na isse or na hi apko
          
          Neil- ( no response)
          
          
          
          
          

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Neil- thank god chup toh hui yeh…kabse roye jaa rhi thi 
          
          Tanvi- lagta hai aaj mere betu ne raat bhar sone ka plan cancel kr diya…kyu?
          
          The baby made a soft sound before Tanvi placed her on the bed…
          
          Tanvi- acha baba theek hai mumma apko bed pe nhi leta rahi…bas ab khush…ab rona band krl
          
          Neil- apko abhi ninni ninni nhi krni?…koi baat nhi 
          
          Tanvi- kya chaiye mere betu ko?…apko mumma papa se baatein krni hai?
          
          Baby blinks her eyes nd Tanvi places a soft kiss on her forehead nd Neil places a soft kiss on her cheeks nd baby smiles slightly nd holds their finger in her tiny hands…
          
          Neil- parso toh meri Mini Neil ke liye ghar mai pooja hai or us din toh apka name bhi decide kiya jayega 
          
          Tanvi- parso toh mumma apne betu ko ache se ready kregi…sab khenge fir aree yeh itni pyaari si cute si princess kon hai?
          
          Neil- 
          

Comfortshipper

Tanvi (whispering)- mujhe bhi dar lgta hai neil…jab ap aise baat krte ho j jaise apko mujh pe bharosa nhi…jaise apko lgta hai mai achi maa nhi hoon…mujhse kbhi glti ho sakti hai…par iska mtlb yeh nhi ki mai apni beti ka khyaal nhi rakh skti…kher mai samjha bhi kise rhi hoon 
          
          Neil- shyd iski nappy change krni pdegi
          
          Tanvi (not looking at him)- ap isse mujhe dedi jiye…mai kr dungi
          
          Neil- mai kr deta hoon…aakhir khar mujhe bhi toh seekhna hai na Mini Neil ko kaise handle krna hai
          
          Tanvi- bola na maine mai change kr deti hoon
          
          Without saying a single word, Neil gives baby to tanvi nd when Tanvi is about to change the baby's nappy she starts crying…
          
          Tanvi- bas betu ho gya…isme roi roi krne ki kya baat haa?
          
          Neil- shyd isse garmi lagri hai…m mai A.C. ka temp. kam kr deta hoon
          
          Tanvi- nhi itna temp. theek hai vrna yeh bimar ho jayegi 
          
          Neil- hmm 
          
          Tanvi- lo betu bas ho gya
          
          Tanvi picks her up in his arms nd pats her back nd baby stops crying nd tanvi places a soft kiss on her ear…
          

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Tanvi (softly)– bas bas mumma ki jaan… Kya ho gya mere betu ko?…apko bhuk lagi hai?…hmm?
          
          Tanvi adjusts her position, wincing a little from the pain but ignoring it….She sits on the bed nd starts feeding the baby nd softly patting her back….
          
          Tanvi- kitni roi roi krte ho na ap pura din…pta hai mumma apko aise rota hua nhi dekh sakti
          
          Neil (softly)- or papa bhi
          
          Tanvi (softly)- this is the best feeling ever jo har ek maa mehsoos krna chahti hai apni life mai ek baar kam se kam…thank youu betu mumma ke pass vapas aane ke liye or mumma ko yeh khushi dene ke liye or mumma ka sapna pura krne ke liye
          
          After feeding, Tanvi makes her burp while patting her back then tries to make the baby sleep, but she remains fussy….Neil watches as Tanvi softly hums a lullaby, rubbing the baby’s back…He moves forward nd sits beside her…
          
          Neil (softly)- mujhe bhi try krne do
          
          Tanvi- hmm
          
          Neil takes the baby in his arms nd starts walking around the room whispering softly…
          
          Neil- Mini Neil kya ho gya?…hmm?…itni ziddi kyu ho rhe ho?…mumma ko tang krna achi baat nhi hai baby
          
          Neil gently rocks her while Tanvi watches quietly…Neil sees the tiredness in her eyes nd the pain she’s hiding….He sighs before speaking….
          
          Neil (guilty)- Tanvi…I am sorry
          
          Tanvi looks away pretending to focus on the baby but her silence speaks volumes….Neil continues rocking the baby, glancing at Tanvi now nd then….
          
          Neil- mujhe nhi kehna chahiye tha ki tum meri beti ka khyaal nhi rakh sakti…maine gusse mai bol diya…mujhe pata hai ki tum sirf usi ka khayal rakh rahi thi…aur tumhe apni dawaai bhool gayi…bas…bas mujhe dar lag gaya tha tumhe aise dekh ke
          
          Tanvi finally looks at him…Her eyes reflecting hurt nd unshed tears…
          
          Tanvi (whispering)- mujhe bhi dar lgta hai neil…jab ap aise baat krte ho j jaise apko mujh pe bharosa nhi…jaise apko lgta hai mai achi maa nhi hoon…mujhse kbhi glti ho sakti hai…par iska mtlb yeh nhi ki mai apni beti ka khyaal nhi rakh skti 
          
          

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          Tanvi froze….His words hurt her deeply…Her heart ached more than her body at that moment….She looked at him, the pain clear in her eyes….
          
          Tanvi- mai apni beti ka hi khyaal rakhte rakhte bhul gyi thi kyuki vo mujhe ek sec tak ke liye bhi nhi chodh rhi thi
          
          Neil- (no response)
          
          Tanvi- apko meri fikr krne ki jarurat nhi…apko kya hi farak pdta hai agar mai us din mar bhi jati toh…kyuki m mai janti hoon ap hamari nanhi si jaan ka ache se dhyaan rkhoge o or usse kbhi maa ki kami nhi mehsoos hone doge
          
          Neil- (looking at her)
          
          Tanvi- mai apna dhyaan kudh rkh skti hoon…ap so jaiye 
          
          Neil- sorry 
          
          Tanvi- nhi chaiye ab mujhe apki sorry or na hi kuch or chaiye ab apse
          
          Suddenly baby wake up nd starts crying nd tanvi immediately picks up the baby in her arms, gently rocking her while trying to soothe her…
          
          Neil- mai dekhta hoon
          
          Tanvi- nhi…mai dekh lungi
          
          Neil- awwleee reee kya hua haa?

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          Neil- bhut shock hai na tujhe yeh sab khelna ka…ab mai dikhata hoon tujhe ki isse kaise khelte hai….kyuki har game mai kisi ek ko toh jeetna or harna toh hota hi hai…kyu?…ab teri haar hogi or meri jeet
          
          Vidyut- chal mai bhi dekhta hoon tu kaise jeet tha hai
          
          Neil- abhi tak tera ghamand nhi gya kyu
          
          Vidyut- jayega bhi kaise
          
          Neil- bhut ghamand hai na tujhe…ab tu dekh mai tera ghamand kaise todta hoon
          
          Ballu- lgta hai boss ap jeet gye 
          
          Vidyut- ?
          
          Ballu- yeh us tanvi se nafrat jo krta hai…pta chala hai yeh usse baat tak ni krta
          
          Vidyut- ohhh…ab toh tu meri tanu ne nafrat krta hai so usse mujhe dede or apni beti ko tu rkh apne pass
          
          Neil- abhi deta hoon tu ruk