Rubabee

@Rubabee *crying* Pretty pretty PLEASE???? ): You are amazing!

@NegitiveAmyLynn oh yoiu make me feel like a good writer lol. What you asking is reasonableish but i just dont have it in me :P 

@NegitiveAmyLynn Thank you. upload soon. <3

Hey, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE (and i wrote all thses, not copied and pasted) PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEE
          Upload SOON! Please? For me? Come on, how can you resist all of these pleases? :D
          I am practically dying!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPLOAAD!!!! :D

Chapter 8 up!!!!! :D

@NegitiveAmyLynn Epic!!!! you should put some more up soon please!!! i really like how nobody liek the famous person :P i kno that probs not something to liek but it makes it more intersting :D

2nd part up!!! <3

@thatsnotmyname ok agreeing to disagree

Ok well, I honor your opinion. Really I do, and not to be disrespecful or anything but you should be lucky I say anything at all. I'd rather someone say that I love your story rather than saying it's crap. Now this is just my opinion, cause frankly I can say what I want on one's story. Now, I'M done. :)

@Nightraven896 hey this might sound a little egoastic but why did you ask me of all the people to read your story? its not that im complaining its just an honest question. i've read your first chapter and its really good! but maybe a little too discriptive. This is something you learn after a while, is to find your flow so the words roll into eachother, to compliment the next in a way. I don't know if later in the chapters you find that flow :) i'm just saying because you asked for crique, slightly delayed but some none the least. :)