I'm not good at reviewing a story. I also don't know how to write the impression I got after reading a story. But I still want to say this to you. Overall I really like your writing, your story, and the characters you make. I feel likes in the same time as them when I read it. I can really feel how desperate Brahms's love for Rui. And also Rui's uneasiness. He just thinking realistically yet he really loved Brahms. God, this kind of slice of life angst story never bore me. He is too young and still he must to go through it all. He is a strong and beautiful creature And he deserve to believe and receive sincere love from Brahms. How impossible and difficult it is, in the end, the little mermaid eventually be able to be with her prince.
Again, even the black sun will still be able to unite with the blue of the sea even if only during the eclipse or at night. Even it's become dark, blue sea is still blue sea, right? It just need a sunlight to shine. I don't know what I'm saying, but I believe their love deserves to become one. Please dont separate them anymore ❤
