CLmauve

@JuMBA-ABMuJ - this author told me to check out your work, and here is my honest review:
          
          Arc one of Lucem Cordibus lays out the foundations for a much bigger conventional universe thanks to its well developed characters, engaging story, and dedicated worldbuilding (i have used the same technique on my works). this work was a fine recommendation from your friend indeed. i cannot wait to see more of it in future. the only criticisms i have are several punctuation errors, having to wait for the next arc, and possible reediting to make some parts split into smaller sub-chapters. 
          
          keep up the good work. :)

CLmauve

@AzhrielIlluma no problem. glad to help :)
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RuineMicroft

@CLmauve Thank you for the review, and I'm happy to know that you're liking my story! And you're criticisms are all noted and I will try my best to fix those that you've pointed out. 
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