Rumble_Fish

Yea.... I'm not dead lol

sarsar14

Could’ve fooled me 
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DragonGirl_97

Welcome back! 
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Rumble_Fish

As I wish to have Keena published, I am going to give it a full edit, ready for people to look at it. I will also be posting these updated chapters (more description, more effective narrative, and just generally better written) here. Thanks to everyone who gave Keena a look, it means so much.
          
          PS. I am aware that I have a character in Keena who happens to have the same name as a... certain infamous gorilla.  And I just wanna say no I am NOT going to change the name since this was written at least a year before that happened.

issamel67

Hey
          When will you update? :)))

issamel67

@mkj3145 ok. No worries. Good luck on your exams :) do well.
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Rumble_Fish

@mkj3145 
            Not long. I have two exams next week then I'm free. I'll much more focused on my writing from then on.
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issamel67

Hello, when are you going to update Wings of Benevolence? :) i like the story:) 

issamel67

Im not a critic so thats all i could come up with
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issamel67

Take your time:) no pressure on you ) study comes first i guess
            I like the plot actually
            I have read other guardian angel type stories but i think its the way you portrayed the charcters and setting up the plot, i like this story
            I hope it will get more better and better as you write
            God bless)
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Rumble_Fish

Hey there, thanks for reading it. I will update it when I get the chance, I'm in my last year at school so I will have exams. May I ask, what do you like about the story? 
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Rumble_Fish

HAPPY THREE-DAYS-AFTER-CHRISTMAS
          Chapter 8 of Unwanted is FINALLY up. I can't apologise enough for the wait, I have been unbelievably busy over the last few months since I have been back at school and it is my final year. But, yay its up!

Rumble_Fish

I've had an idea for a story brewing in my mind for the last month or so and I thought I'd ask for people's opinions.
          It's a "Beauty and the Beast" homage where the genders are reversed but it has a lot of fantasy elements and interesting twists that I hope people will like. Does that sound like something people would read?

snivilus

@Rumble_Fish  Yes! That sounds so good! Do it! (:
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