As I wish to have Keena published, I am going to give it a full edit, ready for people to look at it. I will also be posting these updated chapters (more description, more effective narrative, and just generally better written) here. Thanks to everyone who gave Keena a look, it means so much.
PS. I am aware that I have a character in Keena who happens to have the same name as a... certain infamous gorilla. And I just wanna say no I am NOT going to change the name since this was written at least a year before that happened.