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Thank you so much for the follow, I really appreciate it
AdeAlaoOluwaferanmiA
@Runninlzrd Thank you for the reply, I really appreciate it. About your comment, I promise to work on it ALTHOUGH the Troy Sanders series is over, I only planned for it to be a trilogy. Anyway, I'll think about what you said when planning other series in the future, thanks again for the advice
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Runninlzrd
No problem! I liked your Troy sanders series a lot. A piece of advice, if I may. It would become an even better storyline if you could expand on your world and make more filler that helps everyone understand and relate to your characters. If you expand, the storyline becomes richer and more in depth, in turn adding more excitement to the readers. I DID enjoy the whole series, but could see spaces where filler or explanation of things, events, and people. Loved the story and world you created! Keep up the great work!
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