Rurzii

@melissan2583 Sure am. Could you check out my story if its okay? I'd really appreciate it..

Be_a_freaking_women

Thanks for the comments and for adding "Lavender" to your reading list! Have a good day or night :).

Be_a_freaking_women

Aww thank you so much XX.
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Rurzii

No problem! It’s an amazing story ❤️
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NicAthena

Yo, Athena likes drama. Let's get started shall we?
          
          For someone whom allegedly hates my story, you sure doesn't behave like it. He's a real douche -- my Mason that is. Like for god's sake you commented and read on till chapter 2 (amazing isn't it?) but as long as my story looked stupid to you then it's all fine and dandy?! It's fine to admit my story has a lot reads but my story is totally unrealistic."
          
          Yeah, I admit that. It's my own idea, who cares what I do about it? Plus, have you known their full history? No. People judge too quickly and it was just the beginning of the chapters. Thank you though for the critique although I already know that my story is unrealistic. Craptastic, even. 
          
          el o l,
          Athena yo. c; 

Rurzii

I have no idea what you're talking about..? I never comment that i 'hate' a story nor do I criticise the writer, I merely point out what annoys me in the characters. Characters are like real people to me. Just like how I may be annoyed with the way someone is behaving, I get annoyed by characters too. You don't see me criticising god for making the person the way he/she is, do you? So the same goes to your story. I'm not criticising YOU or your ability as a writer. Anyway, which story are you talking about? I've read alot of stories so I have no idea which one you mean.. :/
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