RuuD-7

So, guys, I was wondering, do you have any opinions about this story so far? I would really like to know your opinions about it, no matter are they good or bad. It will help me a lot with my writing. One more time, English is NOT my first language, so please understand if there are some grammar or spelling mistakes. 
          	
          	D1 :)

RuuD-7

So, guys, I was wondering, do you have any opinions about this story so far? I would really like to know your opinions about it, no matter are they good or bad. It will help me a lot with my writing. One more time, English is NOT my first language, so please understand if there are some grammar or spelling mistakes. 
          
          D1 :)