Rhyme Noreason

No problem. Your story caught my eye so it was only natural lol. 

I'm back in business 

Would like some suggestions on books to look at here on wattpad, any ideas?

heyy

Just got a new piece to my story up. Also posted a story up called vivify.

@ray717  sure

no problem easier  to stay in touch that way@PrincessAvantika 

thank you for fanning

@kase88 thanks for reading it. I read yours as well, it's kind of funny how it seems like your people would kill my people. I especially like your writing style. Quite unique, you have talent.

Ok, I read the first page which was awesome, the two cousins are arguing about telling the reader whats up. So cudo's for that. Then I get into the meat and potatoes. I think I read the first page and was thinking to myself Where the Hell is this going? Cause your all over the place.. kind'ave like Hitchhikers guide to the galaxy.  The first sentence runs on forever. punctuations. Basics, just write it how you think it. it should always be good that way. Another thing take your time. I get it, there are Ideas running around in your head that want to get onto the page. But if you type it to fast then you will not get the entire message across.. (I have found that is one of my biggest faults.) 
           Ill let you know more later its time for sleep.