RyderMatherne

@Melanni_2015 thanks! Hope you enjoy, black mist looks pretty awesome, I look forward to reading 

RyderMatherne

The first chapter of my novel has been updated! I fixed some mistakes and took the advice of many people. I have dropped the character of "Gage" and replaced him with a character I had planned to introduce later. I also cut out a lot of description and added spacing when the characters pov or the scene changes. Please read the new version and provide feedback and let me know if you catch any errors. I am currently working on chapter two!