I’ve decide to rewrite chapters 1 and 2 of Angelic lover to help establish the world Sage lives in. I love the way the chapters are currently written so it’s going to be more of me adding to the story than changing everything. Maybe even editing a few details with chapter 3 too.
In chapter 1, I wrote that Sage and her mom, Kylie, explore the city the day after they arrive at their new home. My plan is to elaborate on that so I can build upon the story’s world. Magic will be involved, and maybe some little critters as well. In order to keep chapter 1 at mid length, the second half of the chapter will probably be moved to chapter 2.
Once I’ve satisfied myself with this issue, I’ll post chapter 4!