Just wanted to drop some feedback on "The Queen's Hunger", even though there's only two chapters posted at the moment :D.
It's very good so far and interesting! The plot from what I can tell is unique and your writing style leaves me with some many questions, it's exciting!
Of course, there are a few grammar mistakes, but I expected so in the author's note you wrote. The sentences could maybe be a bit shorter and try not to use too many details. As said, it's very good and I look forward to reading more!
