Ryu2004
Bueno gente me puse un tiempo en hacer imagenes de nuevo de los personajes pero mas enfocado xd, haciendo unso cambios y ahi se ve en el especial de las capitanas que le hago un reword.
Tambien el inicio del arco 2 lo hare luego de re hacer los escuadrones mas que nada por unos eventos nuevos que hare
creative300000
@Ryu2004 I'm talking about him as a battle partner. In the anime, it's mostly Kyouka Uzen who uses Yuuki in combat, whereas the other leaders don't really use him much. For example, Mira only used his combat form once during a patrol and never again. I think it would be good if those forms were used more in combat in the fanfic.
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Ryu2004
@creative300000 When you say the other leaders use Yuuki in their slave form, do you mean they use him as a battle partner or in bed?
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creative300000
@Ryu2004 1- Here’s something that would be great for distinguishing the combat from the original: Showing Yuuki being utilized by other female leaders besides Kyouka in his Slave Form. I feel like his other forms involving the other leaders are rarely used. To this day, I’ve never seen Mira use her motorcycle form in combat. Also, the form involving two people using him simultaneously was only used once—with Kyouka and Himari—and never appeared again. 2- Something interesting to explore in the next arc would be the Makima x Yuuki relationship. I think that if this relationship is explored well, it could become one of the best parts of the fanfic. I recommend checking out Makima’s wiki and her TV Tropes page to better understand and utilize the character. 3- I really appreciate your dedication to writing this fanfic. And I’m looking forward to seeing everything you have in store for it.
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