Ryu2004

Bueno gente me puse un tiempo en hacer imagenes de nuevo de los personajes pero mas enfocado xd, haciendo unso cambios y ahi se ve en el especial de las capitanas que le hago un reword.
          	
          	Tambien el inicio del arco 2 lo hare luego de re hacer los escuadrones mas que nada por unos eventos nuevos que hare

creative300000

@Ryu2004 I'm talking about him as a battle partner.
          	  
          	  In the anime, it's mostly Kyouka Uzen who uses Yuuki in combat,
          	  
          	  whereas the other leaders don't really use him much.
          	  
          	  For example,
          	  
          	  Mira only used his combat form once during a patrol and never again.
          	  
          	  I think it would be good if those forms were used more in combat in the fanfic.
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Ryu2004

@creative300000 When you say the other leaders use Yuuki in their slave form, do you mean they use him as a battle partner or in bed?
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creative300000

@Ryu2004 1- Here’s something that would be great for distinguishing the combat from the original:
          	  
          	  Showing Yuuki being utilized by other female leaders besides Kyouka in his Slave Form.
          	  
          	  I feel like his other forms involving the other leaders are rarely used.
          	  
          	  To this day, I’ve never seen Mira use her motorcycle form in combat.
          	  
          	  Also, the form involving two people using him simultaneously was only used once—with Kyouka and Himari—and never appeared again.
          	  
          	  2- Something interesting to explore in the next arc would be the Makima x Yuuki relationship.
          	  
          	  I think that if this relationship is explored well, it could become one of the best parts of the fanfic.
          	  
          	  I recommend checking out Makima’s wiki and her TV Tropes page to better understand and utilize the character.
          	  
          	  3- I really appreciate your dedication to writing this fanfic.
          	  
          	  And I’m looking forward to seeing everything you have in store for it.
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Ryu2004

Bueno gente me puse un tiempo en hacer imagenes de nuevo de los personajes pero mas enfocado xd, haciendo unso cambios y ahi se ve en el especial de las capitanas que le hago un reword.
          
          Tambien el inicio del arco 2 lo hare luego de re hacer los escuadrones mas que nada por unos eventos nuevos que hare

creative300000

@Ryu2004 I'm talking about him as a battle partner.
            
            In the anime, it's mostly Kyouka Uzen who uses Yuuki in combat,
            
            whereas the other leaders don't really use him much.
            
            For example,
            
            Mira only used his combat form once during a patrol and never again.
            
            I think it would be good if those forms were used more in combat in the fanfic.
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Ryu2004

@creative300000 When you say the other leaders use Yuuki in their slave form, do you mean they use him as a battle partner or in bed?
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creative300000

@Ryu2004 1- Here’s something that would be great for distinguishing the combat from the original:
            
            Showing Yuuki being utilized by other female leaders besides Kyouka in his Slave Form.
            
            I feel like his other forms involving the other leaders are rarely used.
            
            To this day, I’ve never seen Mira use her motorcycle form in combat.
            
            Also, the form involving two people using him simultaneously was only used once—with Kyouka and Himari—and never appeared again.
            
            2- Something interesting to explore in the next arc would be the Makima x Yuuki relationship.
            
            I think that if this relationship is explored well, it could become one of the best parts of the fanfic.
            
            I recommend checking out Makima’s wiki and her TV Tropes page to better understand and utilize the character.
            
            3- I really appreciate your dedication to writing this fanfic.
            
            And I’m looking forward to seeing everything you have in store for it.
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Ryu2004

Estuve inactivo en el agosto por un descanso que me hice, pero bueno como ya regreso a la uni no estare activo tanto...
          
          Pero que mas da xd, igualmente les estare subiendo los cap del arco 2. aunque primero tendre que hacer un reword a unas cosas que me recomendaron y hace un nuevo cambios en 2 especiales.
          
          Que serian la lista de los nuevos personajes y de los escuadrones por que hare unos nuevos cambios y agregare mas cosas.
          
          Tambien esta el hecho que me hicieron unas recomendaciones que me tomo el tiempo para leerlas y asi planificar las ideas para agregar.

Ryu2004

Bueno ya estoy cerca de terminar mis examanes, per bueno voy a editar unas parte de los cap que seiran mas los titulos y es posible que le salgan eso como un nuevo cap pero solo modifique los titulos. 
          
          y ya pensare en como hacer los ultimos extas del arco 1 para planear el arco 2.
          
          y que ya quiero probar escribir otras cosas para no aburrime

Ghost3447788

@Ryu2004 ah y de paso se anunció que habrá nueva temporada
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Ryu2004

Bueno estoy atrapado en el jutsu de examanes finales de ciclo de la universidad y por eso el cap se retrasara un tiempo hasta que termine estas 2 semanas. para el proximo mes ya terminare mi ciclo y podre subir el cap terminado.
          
          pero lo intentare terminar antes de este mes para ustedes.
          
          y por cierto, que opinarian de una historia de miracolous x bnha pero los portadores serna oc suyos en donde pueden decidir si ser heroes o villanos como vigilantes o lo que desean

creative300000

@Ryu2004 I don't know about that one; I've never watched *Miraculous* in my life, so I wouldn't know what to say.
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Ryu2004

listo, termine los extras del cap 5 y 6, iba a crear mas imagenes para la historia pero me termino dando flojera uqe lo deje por ahora.
          
          ya iniciare a escribir el cap 8 para terminar el primer arco de la historia y ya le hare unos pequeños cambios a la historia para iniciar el arco 2

Ryu2004

Se me ocurrio una idea para una historia, el cual seria una historia en donde ustedes como lectores haran de sistema. 
          
          la historia seria de base en dxd pero pensaba en combinarlo con Fate para usar a shirou emiya como prota y agregar las chicas de fate.
          
          pero bueno la idea es que como sistema le van a dar el protagonista unas misiones que pueden llegar a ser misiones normales como explorar a conquista mujeres.
          
          Aunque ustedes pueden decidir que recompensar dar por las misiones yo sere el admin que lo va a aceptar o negar algunas misiones como recompensas.
          
          Pero yo haria las misiones principales del prota y ustedes mas secundarios.
          
          Si les parece bien la idea diganlo para ir planeandolos

creative300000

@Ryu2004 I think it's a good idea.
            
            But I recommend waiting a bit before starting this story.
            
            The *Mato Seihei no Slave* story is still in its early stages, so it might be too much to handle two stories at once.
            
            I suggest focusing only on this story for now, and then—once *Mato Seihei* has more chapters, like 15, 20, or 30—you can start writing this one as well.
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Ryu2004

Bueno gente estare haciendo unos extras del cap 3 y 4 . luego hare del 5 y 6 para luego hacer el cap 8  y ahi hacer unos extras del cap 7 y 8.
          
          Intentare terminarlo rapido ya que quiero aprovechar los extras para meter informacion que no agregue en los cap.

Ryu2004

@creative300000 I like the ideas you gave about Kyouka, so I'll take them into account, but first I have to finish university, which is really putting me under pressure.
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creative300000

@Ryu2004 1- I'm really looking forward to the extras and the next chapters.
            
            I particularly like the idea of adding extras to showcase more original characters.
            
            As I said before, depending on the chapters, you could add several manga chapters into a single chapter.
            
            Since some chapters are less important and can be shorter.
            
            2- Question:
            
            What did you think of the Kyouka Uzen ideas I posted in the last chapter?
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