RyuEunSeong

New story development and chapters on the way for Rouge Wine with Blood Splatters

WriterGirl004

Would you be willing to do a read-for-read? I'm trying to see what people think of my book Dance of the Damned ❤️

RyuEunSeong

@WriterGirl004 It's a nice work, and you should revise your novel making it greater yet.  You have tons of potential as a writer, keep going.
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RyuEunSeong

I'll be updating chapter 1 more, and smoothing out some of the plot issues while adding more details for scenes and main characters.  Inzhu Jin, Mr. Shin, and the Japanese man will be upgraded with details on looks and appearances. I feel chapter 1 needs a heftier amount of effort and research for it.  I'll be studying a map of Seoul, South Korea and researching the districts to create a more delightful and realistic feel when reading my novel.