Vanessa

I'm back after all these years! Anyways, I've re-published City of Genesis, but a lot of changes have occurred after months of deliberation. Hope you guys are doing well :) Have a great day!

I have returned. It had been an extremely long time and I have no excuse haha. Its good to be back though  I hope you all have a lovely holiday and a happy new year!
          
          Also, City of Genesis is finally being edited! Hooray! Check it out when you have the time 

I recently published chapter twelve of C.O.L.B, but be warned that the paragraphing is bunched together for some reason so I pray that reading this will be easy on your eyes, if not, I'll see if I can fix it ^_^

Well I have updated • Seven • Feel free to read it, but there is a warning for this chapter. If you're not comfortable with MXM scenes, then I advise you don't read it.

Okay, I have done it again (or will be doing it again once I start writing). I slotted a chapter between • Six • and •Seven•. I wanted to go into detail of Cale's and Frederick's relationship so that should be there. I'll have this chapter up as soon as I can, but I've only just returned to school so priorities :\
          
          Anyway, I hope you'll like it.

I published • Four • today and I am willing to let the chapter's events remain the same. However, I do believe I need to elaborate on some parts. If you're confused on something in the chapter, don't be afraid to send me a message. It would be very helpful :)

For those who have started reading (or are awaiting a new chapter) of City of Law Breakers, don't panic when you no longer see chapter • Four•. The former chapter is now labeled number • Five • and the other chapters have been given their appropriate titles. I have decided to slot in a new chapter between • Three • and • Five •. This new chapter will involve world-building (explaining to Shire City's appearance) and Natalia's relationship with the police force. 
          
          Hopefully all goes well and I'll have this chapter up in a couple of days. Work has been keeping me busy :P

Working slowly on the next chapter of City of Law Breakers. It may be up today or tomorrow, it depends on how much time I have with school in the way and everything. I hope you guys will enjoy it :)

Hello there :) Recently, I decided to use this Hemmingway App, which assists you in editing. Link here: http://www.hemingwayapp.com/ I edited my first chapter and realised that I was indeed using passive voice. That is not considered as a grammatical error, but it's not correct either. 
          
          Anyway, it really does help. It suggests you break apart sentences that are too long and highlights paragraphs that are extremely hard to read. The lower the grade bar level is on the right of the page, the better :) Feel free to try it.

@hawkholmes you're very welcome, my dear Hawk :)